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You don't know how I feel
And I'm giving you only the hidden hints
But it's fine 'cause I'll keep it real
And I won't break this time
'Cause I fell deep but your smile made it worth falling for you.

I'll keep it my pace
'Cause I don't want to lose my face
But even though I say so
You know my dignity fade to black when I see you.

I won't find out what type of chick you'd like to be with
'Cause I'd like to make you fall for me
And out of your boundaries
It's everything about you, you're a huge magnet.

I won't fake my words
Though I'll hide my blushes
The age differs but it don't matter
'Cause in the end it's love;
So nothing make sense.
:iconfallenmidnightstars:

Author's Comments

one of the prize for my contest for :iconmode-de-vie:

hope she likes it!

umm..yeah, I'm doing things my way, lol.

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:iconimkimmy4:
wow i love this and i love all of it!!!!!!
especially the last part! ^^

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From the Count of Monte Cristo, "Live for a day will come when you will be happy, and bless life."
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:heart: For I thank God every day for the life He has given me. I am truly blessed with kindness and love, Thank You.
:iconsabrinalhs8:
great job, i really liked this poem!

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~*Sabrina Lynn*~
:iconyanagisakoshita:
*grin* Love the last line. "'cause in the end it's love; so nothing make sense."
:iconfallenmidnightstars:
thanks.

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"You're on your own now, believe me."
Believe me - Fort Minor
:iconfallenmidnightstars:
XD thanks~

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"You're on your own now, believe me."
Believe me - Fort Minor
:iconfallenmidnightstars:
thanks!

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"You're on your own now, believe me."
Believe me - Fort Minor
:iconsylvarant-cross:
Very poetic. Also, I like the use of slang, really fits for the poem. :nod:

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"People have hope only because
they cannot see death standing behind them"~

Contest FTW! -[link]
:iconfallenmidnightstars:
lol.thanks.

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"You're on your own now, believe me."
Believe me - Fort Minor
:iconsylvarant-cross:
Yar! :salute:

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"People have hope only because
they cannot see death standing behind them"~

Contest FTW! -[link]

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