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Boys and girls,
Our gender meant our separation.
..As a girl,
I know, real well, how does it felt to be told different than boys.

Yes, yes. Boys are like the deserts.
While girls, are the icicles..
Two different things lined up together,
It's obviously no match,
But somehow we hang out together.

Boys seems to need girls,
To cool their head off while their high in temper.
Somehow I bet they're wondering how could we stand them,
But hey, life's filled with misery, don't you think?

Girls, on the other hand, always need boys to melt them down.
Yes, with all those sweet flirty words,
They tend to melt us down,
ALthough we tried not to melt down,
They always seems to know the perfect time to whisper those words.

Being either one,
Always bring a luck and sucks to life.
Lucky part for being a girl is,
Ladies first, like they always said.
But somehow it doesn't flatter me~

Yes, I know,
Being either one, just bring confusion to life.
Lucky part for being a boy is,
Simply having more strength and voice obviously.

As a girl,
I don't like it when the boys keep opposing us.
..Not that I hold a grudge against them or what,
Yet they always seems..so..annoying when it comes to who's better at anything.
Like I said, icicle and desert don't match, sometimes.

As a boy,
They won't like it when girls says they're better than them at something.
They have high hopes poured all over them,
Then, when they fall down,
When the high hopes dropped down,
When they could not achieve their goal,
I bet they'll sink and cry inside their heart.
And boys..shouldn't cry, or they'll be called a girl instead, they say.

But both..shall have the same feeling,
Same emotion.
..'Cause both icicle and desert, exist in one world.
So even though they don't exist in the same biome,
Same classification on how they handle things,
Either cooling people off, or melting down,
We're all..the same.

We doubt God...I bet.
..At least once, when you fall down,
When your wings are broken,
You felt hopeless, depressed, asphyxiated...
..You wished for answers, while questions kept coming back to your mind..

We both live..and of course die.
One come, and one gone..
It's just part of the reality in this life..
©2008-2009 ~FallenMidnightStars
:iconfallenmidnightstars:

Author's Comments

this is a poem for the contest :iconkubajo:
the theme was icicle, desert, and gender.
..so I thought, since girls and boys are opposite in many ways, I'll put it together~

time taken: 13 minutes!

dedicated to: :iconkubajo: , boys, girls.

Inspired by: those 3 themes.

listening to: Mountain - Good Charlotte.

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:iconfallenmidnightstars:
thanks!

--
"You're on your own now, believe me."
Believe me - Fort Minor
:iconmindofgenius:
13 MINUTES?!?!?!? Damn, you've certainly put up a serious bar here. Did you mean 13 minutes of typing? Or did that time not include how long it took you to think it out?

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Dare you to unlock the secrets of my mind...

Genius is in the details...and I'm going to live up to that!
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OBJECTION! I defy your logic, and everything it stands for!!!

Panton est substructio vero.
:iconfallenmidnightstars:
hng? --if you read all my poems, you'd know that I could hear one word and write in 2-13 minutes to make poems.
--that's the time taken for all process. read my poems if you have some time. XD

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"You're on your own now, believe me."
Believe me - Fort Minor
:iconfaefara:
your right.. girls and boys are the same.. but also different

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On nights when its too hard to shoulder that dream, leave it to the stars and I'll grab it for you.

Reita is the direct result of playing the "I got your nose" game.

i :heart: Ayabie :meow:

BWAAAAAAAAHnom.

:star:I refuse to live a normal life.:star:
:iconfallenmidnightstars:
XD lol. I never actually think about that like this until I heard those 3 different words come together~

--
"You're on your own now, believe me."
Believe me - Fort Minor
:iconfaefara:
yeah.. it takes many little words to inspire me XD

--
On nights when its too hard to shoulder that dream, leave it to the stars and I'll grab it for you.

Reita is the direct result of playing the "I got your nose" game.

i :heart: Ayabie :meow:

BWAAAAAAAAHnom.

:star:I refuse to live a normal life.:star:
:iconmindofgenius:
....yeah, no offense. Wow....certainly set up a bar. O well- I have a LOT of time to fool around with MY entry...are you sure yours is the best? ;-P (friendly competition)

--
Dare you to unlock the secrets of my mind...

Genius is in the details...and I'm going to live up to that!
-----------------------
OBJECTION! I defy your logic, and everything it stands for!!!

Panton est substructio vero.
:iconjade-xe:
very good but a few things should have been in plural here and there

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"Rawr! I am a kraken from the sea!"

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